Helping crime fiction writers finish stronger manuscripts, master story structure, and write books that keep readers up all night.

Book coaching for

mystery, thriller, suspense, and Horror writers

  • Working with sabrina was one of the best decisions iv'e made for my manuscript

    —GK Daffu
    2025 Winner of Daphne du Maurier Award for Unpublished Mystery/Suspense

  • SABRINA'S INSIGHTS ALWAYS MAKE MY STORY BETTER

    —Kristen Bird
    USA Today Bestselling Author of Watch It Burn

  • My crime thriller is faster paced and harder hitting because of her feedback

    —Chris Wendel
    Author of The Fate of Leaves

  • Brainstorming with you was just plain fun

    —Sterling Savage

What’s a book coach?

Book coach. Developmental editor. Writing group. Beta reader. All common terms you will find when learning how to write—and publish—your work. So what’s the difference? Here’s a quick overview of what to expect with each support system.

  • More often than not, a writing group is your entry support system. Groups can be informal (grab some friends and meet up to write or talk about your work) or formal (register for a critique group through organizations like International Thriller Writers or Mystery Writers Association).

    A writing group is made up of—you guessed it—other writers. These people can become your closest writing friends: the ones who have seen fifteen iterations of your first three chapters, the ones who will cheer you when you sign with your dream agent, and then be first in line to have you sign your debut novel.

    Writing is a solitary sport. But writing groups can help you find community and learn faster than if you are doing it all alone. Every reader has a different lens and can help you see something you couldn’t in your WIP or teach you a great tip that you couldn’t have learned anywhere else!

    The challenge of writing groups is that they are typically made up of people like you—learners, amateurs, aspiring-to-be-published authors. Not all groups are created equal and can quickly become overwhelming. So much feedback—not all of it helpful—and then you have to sort out what works for your novel and what doesn’t. Discernment is a skill.

    Pro-tip: A book coach can help you learn to discern feedback to figure out what will improve your project vs someone with a big head picking your work apart because they like to hear their own voice. Discernment is a skill—I’ll help you learn it.

  • “The best thriller I’ve ever read!” – Your mom

    “OMG it’s soooo good! I would pick this up off the shelf.” – Your bestie

    “Utterly brilliant. Best thing ever written.” –Your spouse

    “I liked it, but I saw the twist coming a mile away.” –Your cousin who reads mysteries and thrillers like you drink Diet Coke.

     

    A Beta reader is someone who is not a writer that you ask to read your book before you share it with the world. The idea is to get their feedback on the story—did they like it? Did the story work? Did they have the kind of reaction you’re hoping your readers will have?—so you can incorporate changes into your manuscript. Everyone needs fresh eyes on their novel before querying or self-publishing.

    The problem with these kinds of beta readers is that they may not know how to tell you what’s wrong. Or worse—they may lie to you to spare your feelings.

    They love you and want to support you on your publishing journey. They are great for an on-the-ground perspective (particularly from an avid reader) and all the ego boosting you could ever need! But they probably can’t tell you how to fix your book.

    You should have a beta reader. They are important—not only to gut check but to give you the encouragement you need to keep going.

    Protip: A book coach can tell you WHAT isn’t working and WHY. If you decide to ask for some beta readers (I recommend you do before sending agent queries!), make sure to write a list of questions you’d like them to answer.

  • A Developmental Editor is a professional who focuses on the big picture of your book—the structure, story arc, character development, etc. Most often, developmental editors will complete manuscript evaluations with a multi-page editorial letter outlining strengths, weaknesses, and a revision roadmap. Most often, a writer will meet with a Developmental Editor once after a manuscript assessment has been done.

    Typically, writers will work with a developmental editor after they’ve completed a draft of their manuscript.

    Protip: A book coach is a developmental editor with sprinkles. You can hire a book coach from the moment you have an idea all the way through querying, including when you are looking for a manuscript evaluation. That’s how I meet most of my clients!

  • This is me!

    A book coach acts like a writing group, a beta reader, and a developmental editor all rolled into one—plus some! I’m also there to hold you accountable as a project manager, support the emotional ups and downs that come with writing (and there are many!), and run right next to you as you chase your dreams of being a published author.

    When you figure out the plot twist in the middle of the night—your book coach is the one who wants to see your news first thing. When you discover that the detective in your thriller is really the villain—your book coach is the one who is going to shout from the rooftops. When you keep saying “I’m going to write a book,” but never get past chapter one—your book coach is the one who to call you on it and help you figure out what’s blocking you, remove it, and get you on your way. When your agent queries keep getting rejected after full requests—your book coach is going to be the one to tell you the truth; it’s not ready. And they’ll all be the one to help you get it there.

    Protip: Book coaches are also often educators who teach workshops or webinars or write articles and Substack newsletters. With a background in adult learning, it’s my goal as a coach to make sure I’m not sure helping you with this manuscript but also teaching valuable skills and lessons to take with you in your next novel.

    If you want more insight on book coaching from Jennie Nash, the premiere expert on this line of work, check out her article with Jane Friedman; Why Do Writers Hire Book Coaches?

WHO I HELP

You. The writer with a story to tell.

But something is stopping you

You have an idea but no outline

You can’t finish your first draft

Your twists aren’t landing

You’ve revised endlessly

You’re preparing to query

a Cheerleader

with a Knife

Fun right? I think so. What this means is that when you work with me, you’ll get someone who is going to be brutally honest without killing your enthusiasm for the work. I won’t pull punches about what’s not working and I won’t stop believing in your ability to make your story shine. I won’t let you stop believing it either.

genre fanatic

I love thrillers. I just do. I love suspense and mysteries and horror as well. But a psychological thriller with a twist that makes your jaw drop and gasp out loud…there’s not much sweeter. And because of this, I have read hundreds of crime fiction novels. I hosted a podcast for 3 years for readers that featured book reviews and recommendations called Thrillers by the Bookclub Podcast. I now host a podcast focused on the craft of writing the dark and twisted—Slaying the Craft.

One of my superpowers is finding the right book for the right reader. When we work together, you will likely receive many book recommendations to study either as comps or with something specific you’re doing in your story that was done well elsewhere. I stay on top of market trends with new releases and book deals because I can’t wait to know what’s coming out. This benefits both of us!

No matter how dark you go, I won’t blink. I don’t have many triggers and even if you think your story is super dark I’m willing to dig into the depths with you. I am not a good fit for anything with animal abuse or death. Otherwise, bring on the wild, twisted, unhinged stories.

Educated & experienced

Before becoming a book coach, I was just like you. A reader and writer who loved talking about books and wished I could do it all day. When I discovered book coaching, I found a way to bring all my professional experience together with my writing and genre expertise, making me the perfect person to help you write your thriller.

I’ve spent nearly twenty years in professional industries as a project manager. I managed timelines, accountability, and milestones for everything from events to software to adult learning. My career has always included some element of teaching adults. When I worked in non-profit fundraising, I developed an award-winning training event. When I worked in tech, I trained new project managers until eventually moving to the learning and development team where I earned a certificate in adult learning from the Association of Talent Development.

I am certified through Author Accelerator as a fiction book coach. This was a rigorous training program on how to analyze a book from end to end. My genre expertise comes from my own reading and writing experience, as well as hundreds of hours in workshops, classes, conferences, and webinars on the craft of writing.

Connected

My podcast, Slaying the Craft, is education-focused, which means every interview with an author gets tactile into how to apply techniques and skills to their own work. This means if you have a burning question and I don’t know the answer…I can ask my next author guest for their perspective.

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aBOUT sABRINA

a Cheerleader with a knife

I love mysteries and thrillers.

I write them, read them, and podcast about them. Crime & Quill is the culmination of my experience as a reader and writer, an Author Accelerator Certified Book Coach, and my extensive background in project management and adult learning.

I specialize in mystery, thriller, suspense, and horror. No matter how dark you go, I won’t blink. And as a cheerleader with a knife, I can’t wait to support you in meeting your writing goals.

I am an Author Accelerator certified book coach. This means I am qualified to coach writers using Author Accelerator's strategy, methods, and materials, but I operate independently and am not affiliated.

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I am an Author Accelerator certified book coach. This means I am qualified to coach writers using Author Accelerator's strategy, methods, and materials, but I operate independently and am not affiliated.